Your About page

Patients check you out on your About page.

A patient on your About page wants to know if they can trust you. We read 20 live Australian clinic About pages to see what helps.

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Out of 20 pages

None printed a registration number.

AHPRA is the body behind the health ad rules and the public register. Not one clinic we read printed an AHPRA number. Only 2 of 20 named AHPRA at all.

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Six facts patients can check

The typical page had only 2 of 6.

The 6 are a named practitioner, registration number, degree and university, years in practice, fees and languages. No page had more than 3. One had none.

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Why the number matters

Patients can search the register for free.

By law, the public register must be free to search on AHPRA's website. With your number, a patient can check you in 30 seconds.

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What is there instead

The word 'best' showed up 17 times.

It was on 9 of the 20 pages. After a person read every flag, 35 sentences were plain claims nobody could check. They sat on 12 of 20 pages.

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We expected worse

Your About page is no more boastful than the rest.

We measured on the same day with the same tool. Of About page sentences, 6.3% had a superlative, against 6.0% elsewhere. The real issue is wasted space.

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A word to handle with care

You can use specialist, with one condition.

Specialist is a claim that needs the matching registration. Without it, using a specialist title is an offence. Most pages make it hard to tell which applies.

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Where our tool went wrong

A third of the flags were wrong.

Our scanner flagged 54 sentences, and a person cut that to 35. The rest were things like menus, idioms and a testimonial, which breaks a different rule.

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What to write instead

Swap each claim for proof.

Name your practitioner and print their registration number. Name the university and the year. Say what your first visit costs. A patient can check every one of those.

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