The rules
01 / 07
As written
Pain-free treatment, every time.
We'll check in with you as we go.
These are made-up lines, like ones I often see.
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Good news first
02 / 07
24 of 30 left them out. You may be fine here already.
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Reviews
03 / 07
As written
My back pain was gone after 2 visits!
Patients often mention our easy parking.
Don't share reviews of your treatment.
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Promises
04 / 07
As written
Get back to full fitness, guaranteed.
We'll set goals with you and review them.
Don't promise more than you can give.
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Offers
05 / 07
As written
Free first visit!
Your first visit is free. It covers a chat and a check.
Tell people what your offer covers.
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Products you sell
06 / 07
As written
We recommend the orthotics we stock.
We sell these, so we benefit when you buy here.
Tell patients when you benefit.
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Your next step
07 / 07
Look for any line about treatment or results. That's a good place to start.
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